Comments on: Novel Watch #12: +3 pages [35.5 total] http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/ Novel Watch & Reviews of Practically Everything Sun, 05 Sep 2010 20:23:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Jacob http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-102 Jacob Sat, 25 Aug 2007 00:36:42 +0000 http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-102 Fish, I know. I was just being mildly clever. Carry on. Fish,

I know. I was just being mildly clever. Carry on.

]]> By: 3 Green Fish http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-101 3 Green Fish Fri, 24 Aug 2007 23:14:26 +0000 http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-101 Jacob: Keep in mind that at the moment, this project is in the "extremely rough draft" stage. Right now I'm just trying to nail down characters and scenes -- the story will probably go through a whole second draft/revision before anyone sees it. And then, sure, you'll be welcome to proofread and comment to your heart's content. Right now I just can't worry about everything being poetic. I play around with a language a little and try to make it nice to a degree, but I'm planning on going back and tightening up pretty much everything . . . and getting rid of things like to many "it"s. Jacob:

Keep in mind that at the moment, this project is in the “extremely rough draft” stage. Right now I’m just trying to nail down characters and scenes — the story will probably go through a whole second draft/revision before anyone sees it. And then, sure, you’ll be welcome to proofread and comment to your heart’s content.

Right now I just can’t worry about everything being poetic. I play around with a language a little and try to make it nice to a degree, but I’m planning on going back and tightening up pretty much everything . . . and getting rid of things like to many “it”s.

]]> By: Jacob http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-100 Jacob Fri, 24 Aug 2007 15:09:04 +0000 http://www.3greenfish.net/2007/08/24/novel-watch-12-3-pages-355-total/#comment-100 A lot of "it"s. As it is, I wonder why a palm has a long-fingered paw. :P But seriously, looking cool. I hope you'll put me on your proofreading committee. A lot of “it”s. As it is, I wonder why a palm has a long-fingered paw. :P

But seriously, looking cool. I hope you’ll put me on your proofreading committee.

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