Novel Watch #26: +10.5 pages [24/62 revised, 70.5 total]
Wow, it sure looks like I wrote a huge amount today, doesn’t it? Well, I did make progress, but a lot of that was due to some pretty good writing that I’m willing to let be for now. I’ve moved a couple chapters up in the story so I can introduce the Tongue of Erskavit sooner, and then complicate matters vaguely related to it. That introduction, I think, works really well — it pisses Bandolor off and I think I managed to capture that.
Also, the farther I get in revision the more the characters seem to be what they ended up as at the end of the first draft. Big surprise there, huh? Anyway, it makes things easier to deal with revising for the moment. I have about 3 more pages to revise before I start working on the new section (which is sandwiched between old sections, rearranged). Making progress!